Poiesis Education / Prove v1

Revise like a writer,
not a chatbot.

Prove reads your draft, names the real problems, and walks you through targeted revisions — paragraph by paragraph. The cursor stays yours.

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Your paragraph

Othello's downfall is caused by jealousy. Iago manipulates him with hints and lies. By the end of the play, he kills Desdemona and himself, which shows how destructive jealousy can be.

CoachCLAIM

You name jealousy as the cause, but the play offers at least three other engines — race, gender, military hierarchy. Which one does your reading depend on?

THESIS · WEAKEVIDENCE · 0/320 MIN TASK
Never rewrites your prose·Five stages of structured revision·Drafts versioned and diffed
What it isn't

Most AI tools finish your sentence and call it help. Prove does the opposite. It asks harder questions, points at specific lines, and waits for you to think. The writing stays yours — so does the learning.

Grounded in 40 years of writing-process research
The loop

Five stages.
One draft at a time.

Most students revise by re-reading and changing words. Prove turns revision into a repeatable practice — so the lessons compound across every essay you write.

  • 01
    Map

    Label every paragraph by what it's doing, before you judge whether it's working.

  • 02
    Diagnose

    Surface the five issues that actually matter — anchored to specific lines.

  • 03
    Plan

    Turn each issue into a small, named revision task you can finish in one sitting.

  • 04
    Revise

    Work one task at a time. The coach asks questions; you do the writing.

  • 05
    Reflect

    Save versions, compare before-and-after, name what you actually learned.

Writing is learned by revising your own thinking — not by receiving a better version of it. Everything below is the short version of why Prove is built the way it is, and the research it leans on.

Why a loop, not draft-and-submit

Nancy Sommers found that novice writers treat revision as proofreading — swapping words, fixing grammar — while experienced writers revise globally, re-seeing the whole argument and reshaping it. The gap is not vocabulary; it is the willingness to change one's mind on the page. Prove enforces that move by sequencing global concerns (claim, structure, evidence) before local ones (sentence, word).

John Hayes and Linda Flower modeled composition as recursive — planning, translating, and reviewing cycle into each other rather than running in a line. The loop is a deliberate scaffold for that recursion: each stage feeds the next, and you can re-enter at any point without losing the work you already did.

Why five stages

Map is problem representation — labeling what each paragraph is trying to do before judging whether it works. Diagnose is the knowledge-transforming move Carl Bereiter and Marlene Scardamalia identify as the single biggest difference between expert and novice writers: experts use writing to interrogate their own ideas, while novices use it to dump what they already know.

Plan, Revise, and Reflect map onto the cluster of strategies the Carnegie Writing Next meta-analysis identifies as having the largest evidence base: explicit strategy instruction, summarization, and the study of models. Diagnose comes before Plan on purpose — you cannot fix a draft you have not yet honestly described.

Why feedback, not generation

John Hattie and Helen Timperley frame effective feedback around three questions: Where am I going? How am I going? Where to next? Every coach turn in Prove is shaped by that spine. Paul Black and Dylan Wiliam's earlier synthesis showed formative assessment to be one of the highest-leverage interventions available in a classroom— provided the feedback is specific, timely, and addressed to the work rather than the writer.

Why the model refuses to write the sentence

Robert and Elizabeth Bjork's principle of desirable difficulties is the cleanest statement of the cost of help: the easier a tool makes the task, the less learning sticks. Effortful retrieval and generation produce durable knowledge; fluent reception produces the illusion of it.

Evan Risko and Sam Gilbert's work on cognitive offloading sharpens this for the AI era: when a tool reliably does a cognitive task for you, your own internal representation of that task degrades. A model that writes your paragraph trains you to need a model that writes your paragraph. So Prove will not. The coach reads, names, questions, and waits. The sentence is yours.

That is the loop. Five stages, one draft at a time, and a model that holds the line on not doing the writing for you.

References
  1. [1]Sommers, N. (1980). Revision Strategies of Student Writers and Experienced Adult Writers. College Composition and Communication, 31(4), 378–388. link ↗
  2. [2]Hayes, J. R., & Flower, L. S. (1980). Identifying the Organization of Writing Processes. In L. W. Gregg & E. R. Steinberg (Eds.), Cognitive Processes in Writing (pp. 3–30). Erlbaum.
  3. [3]Flower, L., & Hayes, J. R. (1981). A Cognitive Process Theory of Writing. College Composition and Communication, 32(4), 365–387. link ↗
  4. [4]Bereiter, C., & Scardamalia, M. (1987). The Psychology of Written Composition. Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.
  5. [5]Graham, S., & Perin, D. (2007). Writing Next: Effective Strategies to Improve Writing of Adolescents in Middle and High Schools. Carnegie Corporation of New York. link ↗
  6. [6]Hattie, J., & Timperley, H. (2007). The Power of Feedback. Review of Educational Research, 77(1), 81–112. link ↗
  7. [7]Black, P., & Wiliam, D. (1998). Inside the Black Box: Raising Standards Through Classroom Assessment. Phi Delta Kappan, 80(2), 139–148.
  8. [8]Bjork, R. A., & Bjork, E. L. (2011). Making Things Hard on Yourself, But in a Good Way: Creating Desirable Difficulties to Enhance Learning. In M. A. Gernsbacher et al. (Eds.), Psychology and the Real World (pp. 56–64). Worth.
  9. [9]Risko, E. F., & Gilbert, S. J. (2016). Cognitive Offloading. Trends in Cognitive Sciences, 20(9), 676–688. link ↗
Questions

Things people ask.

Does it write the essay for me?

No. Prove never produces prose for you. It asks questions, points at specific paragraphs, and tracks what you change between drafts.

Who is it for?

High school and college writers working on essays, applications, lab write-ups, and analytical papers. Teachers use it to surface patterns across a class.

How does it remember my style?

Every paragraph gets a stable fingerprint, so revisions are tracked across versions. Your recurring weaknesses become a pattern dashboard you can revisit.

What do I need to start?

An assignment prompt and a rough draft. You can paste them in or photograph the rubric — Prove will fill in the rest.

Your next draft deserves a sharper reader.